Comments on: Prove Me Wrong

By: Louise

Louise — Mon, 19 Oct 2009 03:15:46 +0000

Huh, the smilie looks out of place. There were originally more spaces between that line and the last line of the poem.

By: Louise

Louise — Mon, 19 Oct 2009 03:14:23 +0000

I lie still. Unable to move.
From the other room the
sound of you choking drills
nails of sound into my skull
the pain makes me not-sleep
a kind of waking dream
as i listen to you try
to cough up your soul
and i wonder if
i can
ever
forgive her.

…it’s not good. But it’s mine. :)

By: Euphrates

Euphrates — Tue, 22 Sep 2009 12:40:06 +0000

So…see, my mate is a slam poet. Aka, a performance poet. So, his poetry really needs to be experienced. :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Tpfy93p_d0

By: Diana

Diana — Wed, 02 Sep 2009 22:25:02 +0000

“Buzz…”

My pretty flowers
I suck nectar from your lips,
rest on your petals

By: Goddess of Java

Goddess of Java — Wed, 12 Aug 2009 16:55:35 +0000

Yep, Melody, Vogon.

By: Melodie

Melodie — Fri, 07 Aug 2009 16:32:38 +0000

First time commenter here… Not a poem, but a song. Caveat: it was written by me when I was a young & idealistic 18-year-old just exploring both my bisexuality and my non-monogamous nature so I highly expect a pronouncement of Vogonity.

A She…
By Melodie

A she.
“A she, oh no it couldn’t be.
How could she want a she?”

It’s me.
And he and she both set me free,
So free to really be.

And he
Connects with every part of me
Yet I still watch for she.

To be
Unbound by society…
Why can’t they see?
This is me…

chorus
And she is me.
I am she.
Reflected on throughout eternity.
Distinctions blur,
Am I still me?

When he
Is lying there right next to me
A picture of safety?

Cause we
Together we are free to flee
conventionality

Three:
Why only two when ecstasy
Can be with three?

To be
Unbound by society
But could they ever see?
This is me…

chorus
And she is me.
I am she.
Reflected on throughout eternity.
A fire burns
Will it consume me?

In she
I view myself, a secret me
One who grew up pretty

Maybe
That girl wants only honesty
Originality

I see
The songs of he and she and we
Are all a tapestry

I’m me
Unbound by society
Because I finally see
This is me.

chorus
And she is me.
I am she.
Reflected on throughout eternity.
Forever more
Together, We.

By: Lucie

Lucie — Sun, 02 Aug 2009 18:27:33 +0000

Okay, here’s mine… late, but I’m curious. My husband wouldn’t call it Vogon, lol. But he did say it’s not as good as some of my stuff. Our girlfriend liked it.

BTW, this was written on a road trip home when we were in the process of moving her in with us. So I was probably overly sappy at the time.

The Two of Me

Unwavering strength of self
His love is quiet surety
I am safe in his embrace
He taught me to stand,
and remains firmly beside me

Fantasies fulfilled beneath her fingertips
Her love is passionate grace
I see my beauty in her eyes,
and believe

With both, I am utterly shattered…
and never more complete.

By: meganeko_mausuu

meganeko_mausuu — Thu, 30 Jul 2009 04:09:26 +0000

Snuggling my bear
I dream about all my loves
and wish they were here.

By: Babasyzygy

Babasyzygy — Thu, 23 Jul 2009 11:57:27 +0000

Three loves, our goal bliss.
Compassion, candor, support…
Where went all my time?

By: Goddess of Java

Goddess of Java — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 19:31:39 +0000

Takes one to know one, indeed. *grin* You got it in one! :P

Though honesty forces me to admit you’ve not QUITE achieved Vogonity with that one. Work harder!